hi, Please find below some corrections spotted by our nordugrid colleagues. Balazs
-------- Original Message -------- Subject: Re: [NG-disc] GLUE 2.0 Specification - draft 41 - Working Group Last Call Date: Wed, 14 May 2008 16:06:55 +0200 From: Mattias Ellert <mattias.ellert@fysast.uu.se> Reply-To: Technical discussion about the middleware <nordugrid-discuss@nordugrid.org> To: Technical discussion about the middleware <nordugrid-discuss@nordugrid.org> References: <48299CD2.5070807@hep.lu.se>
Hi (especially Balázs),
here are a few comments on the last call draft.
Page 4: ‘MUST” → “MUST”
Page 4: fmultiple → multiple (or maybe multiples)
Page 11: see Section 0 → see Section 6.2
Page 13: In the table for the Policy entity, UserDomain.ID is marked <<abstract>> though it is not.
Page 15: Application Environment Handle → Application Handle
Page 16: single computing manager which execution environments → single computing manager whose execution environments
Page 20: see Section 0 → see Section 5.6
Page 21: The description for LogicalCPUDistribution doesn't make sense
General: OtherInfo attribute vs. Extension entity association. Do you need both? When to use which? You probably though of this already.
General: Some of the tables lack the vertical dividers/edges.
Mattias