Dear Glue WG, below are some comments to the document. Best, Andre. - page 3: Exisiting -> Existing - page 3: 'organization_name' is marked as RECOMMENDED (not MUST), but later on is part of the 'minimum requirement' -- that seems to be a contradiction? - page 4: 'should be RECOMMENDED' -> 'is RECOMMENDED' - page 4: 'organization_name' and 'interface_name' are MANDATORY, but '<organization_name>.<interface_name>' is 'RECOMMENDED'. Are there real alternatives to the latter or should that be a 'MUST' ? - page 5: 'org.ogf.glue.* SHOULD be used if there are issues with domain names..' - I am not sure what that means. What issues? Also, there are two points at the end of sentence. - 'If a project ends and the product has an orphaned reverse domain name, the name can be kept.' - this reads like the orphaned name is the one to be kept -- is that correct? - line 119: should -> SHOULD - line 128: should not -> SHOULD NOT ; bu -> by - line 130: RECOMMENDED NOT -> NOT RECOMMENDED - line 133: cannot be -> MUST NOT be - line 149: 'If the values are accepted, the Status field SHOULD contain Recommended.' -> isn't that a MUST? If not, what other value could it be? - line 151: 'As soon as possible' -> might want to replace with 'at the next group meeting or call'? ASAP does not mean much ;) - a few documents are referenced in the text, but proper references/links are at the end of the document are missing. On Mon, Jun 16, 2014 at 4:41 PM, Navarro, John-Paul F. <navarro@mcs.anl.gov> wrote:
GLUE WG:
From our last GLUE WG teleconference June 3, 2014:
Action 2: GLUE WG to review Florido's revised Enumerations document Action 2: At the next GLUE WG call we will vote on the updated document
We will be taking a formal vote tomorrow, June 17, to accept the "OGF GLUE2 Enumerations procedures and best practices" as our practice.
Please review the document here: odt: https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13260?download= pdf: https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13261?download=
If you have opinion on this best practices document please reply with:
APPROVE - if you support this best practice DISAPPROVE - if you object, please clearly summarize your objections so that we can discuss them
If you approve but have suggested please reply with your approval and list your suggestions.
Regards,
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