Hi,
# pg 5 pa 6, # pg 6 pa 1, 2, 3, 4 ... all this is a repetition of previous text!
Do you mean Section 2.1? If so, do you mean it should be deleted, shortened or rephrased? This text does sound a bit introductory, but it is definitely different from the intro itself. (or, I am missing the point.)
Yep, section 2.1. In the version I printed, the last paragraph on page 5 is exactly the same as the first paragraph on the same page, and the next four paragraphs (1-4 on page 6) are exactly the same as paragraphs 2-5 on page 5. It looks like a copy-one-paste-twice type of error to me :-)
pg 7 fig 3: I would change (b), as it doesn't reflect the horizontal nature of interactions at all - in fact, it looks quite vertical. There are no interactions between NS and grid services (or other NS's) shown.
Maybe the Figure does not reflect the "horizontal" nature of the concept very well, but it is in my opinion needed as an alternative to the "vertical" paradigm of Grid-network interactions. Think of it as network running internally within the Grid service, e.g. such as virtualizing a distributed machine (over network).
Absolutely! I definitely didn't mean to say that it should be removed!!! - but I think that it should be changed to show the horizontal aspect more clearly. Cheers, Michael